Like You

I look into your eyes,

And I go into a transe.

I have spread my dreams under your feet,

Tread softly cause you tread on my dreams.

All I see is you, I'm in heaven.

You are god through my eyes.

My words cannot describe my feelings,

You play on clouds all day.

Shooting your love everywhere.

You have two wings,

And a bow and arrow.

Your heaven is perfect,

Just like YOU.

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

A beautiful take on the "phrase" contest. Thank you for submitting your poem! ~ Helena ~

[Kylie Dunlop-Grigg]

Thank you Helena :) I thoroughly enjoyed writing it and trying to work the phrase in. I'm quite new at this, so feedback is great!