Rien

A Poem by kym820

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© 2008 kym820

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Adela Muresan

:)) Rien huh ? Well the title is a very strong connection with the poem =D .

A.M.

Posted 17 Years Ago

The Mad Prophet

Although very artistic, grammer needs fixed a bit. Also I noticed a lot of miss spelled words like hipopotamus, and bake sale. I think you could fix up the middle line, other then that it was well writen. Thsnk you for sharing.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 8, 2008
Last Updated on July 8, 2008

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kym820

Philadelphia, PA

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Update I am 55 years old now. I've been away from the writer's cafe for a long time. The last time I was on here I was 42 years old. Let's see if I can get back on track with my writing. more..