Damn

A Poem by kym820

DAMN

Once a dream

Now a nightmare

Warnings sent my way

Warnings I ignored

Signs to get out

Signs I ignored

Damned be this place

Burning, burning in my chest

Pounding pressure in my head

Realizing I’m not like the rest

Anger grips me seeing red

Damned be this place

Damn

© 2008 kym820

Author's Note

All advice welcome. All criticism positive and negative expected.

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The Mad Prophet

Not bad, I like how you expressed finding yourself in a damned world, then casualy putted to the side, Damn... Very creative.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on July 15, 2008
Last Updated on July 15, 2008

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kym820

Philadelphia, PA

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Update I am 55 years old now. I've been away from the writer's cafe for a long time. The last time I was on here I was 42 years old. Let's see if I can get back on track with my writing. more..