Summer Love

None needed

The sun kisses her

Beads of sweat glisten on her skin

Summertime lovers

~Kym820~

Reviews

[Mistral Bilgera]

hello!

Congratulations on finishing your baccalaureate!

Thanks for the review of my older poem, Comfort.

I read this sexy poem and there are significant points i like...

1. I love the conciseness of the poem. Long poems give me a Robert Frost- like feel, and i know some people who can't stand it.

2. Vivid, and yet, it leaves a lot to the imagination. You wouldn't be able to tell if they're making love, or on a grassy hill, but readers go figure.

3. Is this a haiku? it's 5-8-5. But what the hell. I love Haikus or semi haikus, if they ever exist.


Keep it up! Godspeed!

+Gem MB