i cant take it

emo, freak, monster

the names they use for me

emo, freak, monster

they are cruel yes but true

die, run, cut

things they tell me to do

die, run, cut

the sad part is ive thought about it

push, kick, punch

the abuse they give me everyday

push, kick, punch

i fight back but always end up damaged

cry, shake, scream

theres only so much i can take

cry, shake, scream

they laugh when i finally give up

help help help

the thing that i want most

help help help

the thing that will never come

Author's Note

i pretend to be fine but i dont think i will ever be fine

Reviews

[Dream Catcher]

Aw.. Don't let them ever get to you. No matter how much they keep saying this stuff stay strong underneath, nothing they do can ever take away who you are. They say this stuff to try and make themselves feel better cause they are shallow. They are the shallow ones.

[ChristianM]

People who bully have either some hidden psychological trauma, or come from a broken home. They don't know how else to treat people. Bullies find other bullies kind of how vermin find each other in the sewers. They never pick on one person but many. It's the only way they know how to communicate believe it or not. Getting in trouble for them means nothing, it will never change them. You must show them you're unafraid and if that means getting in their face do so. This will tell them you're a strong and independent person and their sewer talk doesn't phase you.

[The Analog Kid]

I remember how mean middle and high school kids were. Powerful write. You are cool enough to write. They most likely can't:) If you have that skill, you most likely will stand out as an adult!

[Dom]

This was a great poem. It was very powerful and held lots of emotion. Awesome job! :)

[Not A Writer]

Good job in use words repeatedly. Help is more than often needed in this cruel world. This world is senseless. I hope you will feel better. Don't give up the fight. Love will come in the end. Perseverance is the key. Anyways good job in writing this. Ethan

[Kyla Keltner]

Teehee, I could take everyone of those b*****s if I wanted too. And you know I could (:

[Kaelyn Shea]

thanx sissy! you make me smile all the time with your threats to madison and taylor and annie lol i lovez you

[Kyla Keltner]

Listen to Joshua, and you know what I'mma do to them damn b*****s, slice their heads off. OR you can help me, so then we'll both enjoy it.(:
Babe, I love you. You don't deserve to be treated that wayy, no wonder no one truely loves them, because they're mean to everyone.

[Nathan Durham]

That was really powerful. Every word brought back countless agonizing memories. This was well written in a good style. Never take people's s**t.

[Holly-Marie]

Try to hold your head high if you can. I went through all this and you never really forget. But as you get a little older you realise that the people who do things like this are usually very miserable and so feel the need to upset someone else. They're the ones who have issues and feel the need to be cruel to someone else.
A very powerful poem by the way.

[Kaelyn Shea]

im scared of what they tell me