Seduce Me (My-ku)

If your intentions are to seduce me

I think you ought to know

toss aside those lacy panties

for your aim is much too low

Reviews

[The 13th Eros]

You have written an entire novel in four lines. What a small spark can consume an entire forest... standing back. ;)

[Frieda P]

Ohhhhh, how did I miss this...more guys should read this one! Loving the My-ku boss lady. ;-) Nicely said.

[LA Lorena]

thank you Frieda.

[Frieda P]

welcome, enjoy your New Year x

[ms. barrie]

love your choice of words in this write. depicting one who is in command of being sensually demanding, in control, of this seduction you brilliantly played out here. great job. 100 to 100!

[LA Lorena]

thanks barrie. your comments are much appreciated.

[ms. barrie]

you welcome, and like-wise :)

[CS]

Well said!

[KAOlmsted]

Ha, yeah...good advice.

[LA Lorena]

I'm always full of it. Of course, it's yet to be determined exactly what *IT* is. ;)

[KAOlmsted]

Happy New Year ;-)

[Ken Simm.]

Sage advice. Just writing that down for future reference.

[LA Lorena]

LOL. It's a wise man who takes notes! Happy New Year to you Ken!

[sirenribbon@thehptshirt..]

Ahhh this is sexy and fresh. Well done very cute:)

[LA Lorena]

thank you for dropping in Siren, nice to meet you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha branching out alone, forging a path. Good job though and humorous.