Caliente

We danced salsa and drowned our inhibitions

in tequila and passion

my Spanish limited, his English halting

smiles and bold glances

paved a road that words couldn't

smoldering looks and brazen touch

spoke more clearly than any words ever could

language barrier breached, we spoke in tongues

a universal language

of breathless, wanton, panting whispers and sighs

two hearts in tune to music's fiery tempo

and bodies playing a staccato rythym

to their final crescendo

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[quinfinn]

so.....did Miguel bring a banana to your cabana? sounds like you had a "fruitful" time on your vacation, my dear. what a sweet, entertaining little poem! well done! i am sure they will never forget our L A Lorena down there in the land of enchantment and salsa nights!

[LA Lorena]

Ah, can't blame a girl for dreaming, can you?

[quinfinn]

no sweetie, not in the least!

[The 13th Eros]

Your dance moves so passionately... powerfully building as your minds and bodies move to that crescendo. This is that sweet, spicy moment when the world melts away and all that is left is euphoria. No words can possibly express this... only sighs. xo

[Relic]

You don't need to speak the same language to dance like that huh? Or were you? Hm

[LA Lorena]

were I what? dancing? Ah relic, there is dancing, and then there is Dancing!

[Relic]

haha. :)

[C.R.Turner]

¡Olé!

[LA Lorena]

wake me up when I've stopped dreaming, okay?

[C.R.Turner]

Sacre bleu! :/

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Holy Salsa, that was saucy and spicy... sounds like you were getting hot hot hot down there.

[LA Lorena]

Only in my mind Dale. ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well sometimes fantasy helps escape reality.

[Frieda P]

Whoa, I hope you took pictures of this vacation! ¡Ay, caramba! Doing a little Spanish conquest dance here!

[LA Lorena]

I hope this satisfies your request! ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha surpassed my expectations!! ;-)

[Ken Simm.]

They say that travel broadens the mind it also inspires the writing. Who had a good time then?

[LA Lorena]

I had a great time, just not as great as this poem implies. Imagination is a beautiful thing! ;)