Thinking Out Loud

A four line poem using 1 syllable for the first line 5 syllables for the second line 5 syllable for the 3rd line 9 syllable for the 4th line

Thinking out loud

Minds'

memories fill thought

of haves and have not …

be happy that you never forgot!

Author's Note

Hope if you happen to stop by and read my little poem you will take the time to review ...
I always review whatever I read,
Lisa

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Beautiful, meaningful poem Lisa... My interpretation is that never forget your status in life and if you can help those who are destitute, then do so, the "HAVES" should think of the "HAVE NOTS"....because many times the "HAVE NOTS" do share with each other....lovely structure and grace to this piece...
WARMLY, B

[Lisasview]

Every time I tried to respond to your thoughtful review the site would not allow me to type... Luckily
I just tried again...
I just love that you understood the true meaning of my poem.
Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing dear Betty,
Lisa

[W. Barrett Munn]

Reminds me of something Mary Oliver once said: the older I get the shorter my poems. Maybe we want to make sure we can finish them?

W

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful quote. Happy to read

[Lisasview]

Just something I came up with in a minute...Thank you,
Lisa