Journey

About loves journey and death

Our Journey....

    

    Fingertips circled love's cup of youth;

    only We could imbibe of this truth.

    Each moment in memory held deep,

    often remembered while still asleep.

    

    Sometimes, quick breaths became paused 'n caught,

    between what was real and what was nought …

    still feeling thrills of when we first kissed

    … these, are sweet times, will always be missed.

    

    Yet, shared in our dreams, our lives shine bold;

    these are stories yearning to be told …

    of someone met, with that certain glance.

    Life's but a journey ~ love is our dance.

Author's Note

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I would appreciate a review. I always review whatever I read.

Reviews

[Lorry]

Lifes dream shared is indeed blessed. Knowing smiles, unspoken understanding and all those instant memories flashing as you gear their name is certainly better than talking to the wall and falling out with the bathroom mirror every morning, as you catch sight of yourself and ask your reflection what you're looking at!
I think it was your first verse that got me to thinking how amazing it would be to hear a baby talk from birth and hear them be amazed at why the had a TV channel playing in their head as they slept.
I wonder how long it would be before they asked how to change the channel. 😃

[Lisasview]

Hi Lorry,
I just realized my last and most important line was cut off
Life's but a journey ~ love is our dance.
So I am thinking you never saw it??
Thank you for your understanding of what my poem means...
Lisa, still in Paris
Lisa

[Lorry]

Ahh, ties it up nicely now.

[emmajoygreen]

Gently passionate words take time to create and read true... and you have, Lisa, you truly have.

'Each moment in memory held deep,
often remembered while still asleep.'

[Lisasview]

Hi Emmajoy, My dear dear friend,
I always delight in your kind reviews!!
Lisasview, now in Paris

[emmajoygreen]

Smiling in the very early UK morning: many thanks for your visit. Will be in touch when my eyes are open and my brain awake. A bientot.....

[Kady R.]

Hiii Lisaaa!!! Sooo excited about the new poem!! It's flows so well with the rhyming and the rhythm. It's so sentimental. I really enjoyed reading this.

[Lisasview]

Glad you like it Kady..
Lisa