The fallen

My first poem on here...I don't really use many poetic devices, it's more free verse.

The words on your lips,

The shimmer in your eyes

The warmth that I feel when I see your smile

The tousle of your hair

The richness of your voice

My heart had no choice.

I've fallen,

And only you can catch me.

 

And yet I'm here.

Wondering.

What do you feel?

Do you know?

Should I...no.

I stand,

Listening to you,

Close enough to touch,

Yet I feel miles away.

 

I've fallen,

And only you can catch me.

Author's Note

Ignore any spelling/grammar mistakes please.
Tell me what you truely think and any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism
Thanks,
Caitlyn