I Still Cant Believe

Lyrics

I was a doubtful girl
Living in dreams of black and white
He was unexpected
Helping me see what wasn't right

I knew from the first time
That he ever crossed my mind
That I'd come to love him
And all my stars would align

He calls me beautiful
As I sing him to sleep at night
I tell him my secrets
And he holds me till the morning light

I'm finding that words always fail
To describe all that I feel
So I write him love songs
And I pinch myself to make sure it's real

He washed me clean
Then dried my eyes
He put color in my dreams
He caught me by surprise
And I still can't believe
This night is mine.

He found me in pieces
With my love bleeding into the sea
I said it was useless
I was on the road to eternity

He pointed my eyes to the sky
Said that everything could be mine
If I'd learn to let go
Of the things that keep me behind

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.
I wrote it at 4 am, so just
let me know if you notice
anything that sounds out
of place. thank you (:

Reviews

[Aurora Night]

Wow you have a great peom here. I love the part where you say

He found me in pieces
With my love bleeding into the sea
I said it was useless
I was on the road to eternity

you make the character sound as if this figure in her life is her hero and savior. You did a great job writing this. You add such a loving tone and mood to the peom. You have an amazing way with words. Great write. Keep writing.

[bluessadmood]

Oh this was so lovely and beautiful,how easy soft going and so tender words
Its full in emotions..when I read ,I could fly..the feelings are so true and intense
I loved these lines..All my stars would align..I sing to him at night,till morning light
...........................Words fail me to tell how I feel,so I write you love songs
...........................He washed me clean and dried my eyes,colored my dreams
...........................Caught me by surprise..and i knew the night was mine
Oh I see so much talent at writing here..its so lovely,how i enjoyed this
lovely write..

[closed account]

ohhh don't care about grammar!!
the words tell a story and it's one that
I know, allot can relate too.. that is true poetry..