I Love the Way

I love the way you look at me with your eyes so bright and blue,
I love the way you kiss me you lips so soft and smooth,
I love the way you make me so happy and the way you show you care,
I love the way you say i love you and the way your always there,
I love the way you touch me always sending chills down my spine,
I love the way you are with me and glad the you are mine….

Reviews

[Wildecat]

LacyBug, this is so sweet, I truly loved this poem.

[Just Mercedes]

Sweet sentiments expressed here, with a nice flow and rhyme scheme.

Some attention to typos would allow the poem to have greater impact.

A bright, positive write!

[Michael V]

Nice....My favorite type of poem. Its cool i dig it. I love the way you describe the lips so soft and smooth..mmmm..good job!