Hard Storm Delight

The timeless passion of that one stormy night

Hard Storm Delight

 

There was a time

There was a place

Just you and I

No escape

 

You came to me

I let you do

You touched me first

Eyes cobalt blue

 

It felt so hot

Feeling the spins

Hang on your body

In stormy winds

 

We held hands

Walked the sea wall

Started to dance

Sensations of rainfall

 

Eyes that locked

We just knew

You TOOK me then

Forceful rogue in you

 

Lightening skies

Crystal drips

Fall from my hair

Kissed swollen lips

 

It was a time

It was that place

Sealed in the heart

Can’t be replaced

 

© LadyAnn Graham-Gilreath

August 7^th, 2014

Author's Note

The one night I made love in a storm never forgotten to this day sealed up in the deepst part of my heart

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Real logic and words.
"It was a time
It was that place
Sealed in the heart
Can’t be replaced"
I agree. Can't be replaced and leave us with a lesson. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my dear friend.
Coyote

[LadyAnn68]

Oh my you have brought a smile to my face! I remember this with such lust in my heart a feeling of complete heightened satisfaction!! This is one that will take to grave! Lol ahahaha

[Coyote Poetry]

I 'm glad and I agree.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Very sweet. A treasured memory well expressed.

[LadyAnn68]

I am searching Google images like you suggested....I want JUST the right thing,...may take time to find...but thanks for reviewing here I appreciate it...yes it was and still is a great memeory!

[Jamestown]

These memories are the one's that we hold for good reason:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[LadyAnn68]

Kind of different for me...but still a very warm memory...thanks for reviewing.

[Chris]

Memories made for tomorrows... a soft rhyming scheme - some minor stumbles read aloud.

[LadyAnn68]

I wrote this just the other day when I was remembering the time I made love on a sea wall in a huge rainstorm an it was UNBELIEVABLE...to a stranger! Many years ago but it was definitely just like the poem expresses...I wrote it fast...do you have some suggestions? I am always open to you! ANYTIME....ANYWHERE...JUST TO YOU CHRIS!

[Chris]

The drama of when to race - when to pause... how long... the timing, tones, and how the words are meant to tie together (or even not) - that is really the author's task to show the reader. Punctuation (not necessarily grammatically correct) , italics, bolds... visual references, line formations ...such cues add to a reader's ability to find the author's intent.

[LadyAnn68]

YOU... need to be my coach...how about it? I am trying to get together my addiction poetry therapy workbook,,,maybe you can help? you are good at what you say...

[s y e]

Oh la la, my gorgeous lady this was amazing and so very sensual and quite romanti too. I so loved this one and think hearing you read it allowed will just add to the power and passion! Damn girl, this was out of this world crazy good. :-) Definitely one of my favourites from you!! :D

[LadyAnn68]

You always make me fell like a Queen...thank you for that!

[s y e]

You can be my poetry Queen, LOL

[LadyAnn68]

My prayer answered...lol hahaha

[s y e]

Hahaha, can't wait to hear you read this!! SO EXCITED NOW!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

OOOHHHHH there are some sensual moments between lovers that live in infamy, I believe this one you wrote about is one of those moments.

[LadyAnn68]

You got it exactly...thank you...but is it alright to read tomorrow?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yes I think it would be great to hear you read it tomorrow night.

[Sami Khalil]

Those immense and passionate moments do stay in our minds with flashes of reality. The more fun we had, the more longings we do have for repetition. A great write...:)........

[LadyAnn68]

Oh thank you Sami...it was a GREAT night trust me....I don't know why I thought of it but it just came out so fast when I did ??? I must be thinking lust...oh well...yes I would love to repeat that night ANYTIME! LOL hahahahaha Thanlkuyopu I feel better now!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome....:)......