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We could all be in love

And love can onluy be

Once

We

let it....

 

Speak it into existance

Hang it from yoru sleeve liek a pendant...

I'm loves greatest challenge

And there goes that young man bandent...

 

 

Bang bang bang...

Off goes my pendant.

 

I could get it back one day

But im not sure I want it...

Loves a hurtful game of cops and robbers

But only

if you let it......

 

Play out...

Reviews

[LadyCardiac]

thanks everyone sorry for the mindless grammatical errors.

[Rene Velez]

nice write Lady, short and thought provoking yet simple in it's delivery, one for the masses...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You capture all of the joys we forfeit when we try to protect ourselves from being injured at the hands of love.

[Poetic Beauty]

Love isnt always smooth sailing but I truly have found it is better to have loved and lost than never have loved at all. I like the way you tell this story. It is unique and creative. Cops and robbers.

[Ruth]

Sometimes I think love is something we shall never understand the depths of! This is a clever portrayal of that :) Love it :)
xoxo