The Woman and a Question

She is primal female predator.. jaded, been there, aloof, yet... still curious and hopeful deep down...

 

 

The Woman and a Question

 

 

I feel the wind of change blowing in,
 like the memory of a fever I had back then;

 

I feel the wind of change  blowing in,
like the first time I realized I was in love;

 

I find the door so very easy to shut these days.

 I find the questions tougher to ask these days.

 

So many wasted nights spent
 with my deep longing
 turned to pain

 

Are you going to be the one
 to save me from myself?

 

Not like the white lightning
 that comes only in the storm so half hearted.

 

But the hurricane that sweeps me away with him to nevermore

 

I stand in a doorway waiting
without breath,
without  a heartbeat until;

 you arrive.

 

You will have to awaken this beauty my friend
 because she is so sound asleep.

 

You will have to know the answers to the questions she will ask you

 

you will have to be ready to ride the whirlwind
because she is a  magic woman.

 

A woman of the desert storm,
 that blows across dry parched land.

 

She is the rain maker
 and she finds the time to make it rain.

 

She can find the time to make it rain
 for a new lover who is an old friend.

 

If you trust yourself keep on riding that steel monster for here I stand and wait.

 

Wait like every princess in every story that you have ever read

 
Waiting for a true fantasy to arrive just once in this awful world

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Let it be you

Author's Note

I welcome all comments

Reviews

[Eddie M deadwolf]

Man, ALWAYS blew me away readin this, one of my favorite write, all time...
This really says everythin that like to hear, an read, also like the part, "You will have to know the answers to the questions she will ask you, you will have to be ready to ride the whirl wind" Oh my Lord, that is a classic kind of Sassy, strong, an straight forward, not at ALL like the princesses that read in the stories, that is a Brilliant twist, dark an lovely... wolf

[Violet's Run]

eddie my friend I miss your good humor and your warm comments.. I miss the life and the energy. I am trying to make it work without it andI I have to say i am not doing too welll
check out my message on DUP. susan

[Einstein Noodle]

such longing ... broken too many times one lies in the wastelands ... i am glad you ended this with that spark of hope .. waiting is not easy for sure ... enjoyed reading and experiencing your poem ..it is quite emotive for me ...
E.

[Violet's Run]

hi Einstein , this poem shows my true self.. more than I care to admit.. it reflects a situation and a relationship aftermath really and yet she is being as honest as she can ...it still is a wind of change.. but I love to ride motorcycles .. so the monster had better get there..hehe

[Einstein Noodle]

:) love it!
E.

[A. Amos]

Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills. 

[Violet's Run]

thank you so much for your read and comment

[A. Amos]

You're good my friend and will be back to read more of your work:)

[SAYED THANGAL]

very beautiful and thought provoking, the first line itself has the capacity to render the rest of the poem.The images so beautiful and connecting to the main idea. all the best
sayed