My Voided Heart

My Voided Heart
by Tricia Pattinson

I watch as a black hole
Descends upon my heart

When my heart steps in
A singularity I become

Reviews

[Lauriegirl]

wow how profound this. One of your best in my humble opinion. I love all of your imagery and choice of words here. good job

[Tricia Pattinson]

Thank you!

[Rocans (Asher)]

Short but profound. I like the title also.

[Tricia Pattinson]

Thank you!

[Patrick]

This is very good. Very very good.

[Tricia Pattinson]

Thank you!