Simple Beauty

Poem

Earth! 

Blue sky, grey sky, clear sky, cloud sky.

Water!

Blue water, green water, clear water, dark water.

Grass!

Long grass, short grass, blue grass, green grass.

Simple pleasures.

Flower!

Small flower, red flower, tree flower, dead flower.

Tree!

Oak tree, Tall tree, Maple tree, fallen tree

Bird!

Blue bird, black bird, small bird, big bird

Simple beauties

Lighthouse!

Sea side, Rock side, bright light, all night

Boat! 
Big boat, small boat, tug boat, fish boat.

Earth!

Green grass, Small flower, clear water, fallen tree.

Such simple things make a very simple beauty

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

And you have written this in the simplest way that enlightened the meaning of the poem... There is something special in simplicity, and often life's purest pleasures, happiness and peace are found in the simple things... A very comforting write, bearing meaning of life...

Sincerely
Dhiman

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Very simple and beautiful poem!

[Gee]

A very nice read.Simply written,easy to read, and more important,understand.well done.

[Closet Writer]

Thank you for your review. I hope you continue to do so, all feed back is very important to me as an armature writer

[Jamie]

I love the environmental elements you have used in this really paints a beautiful picture! Great write and a pleasure to read! Great work!

[Closet Writer]

Thank you so much for your feed back. Great to have a fan! I sure hope you continue to read more and leave your opinions and feedback!! It does nothing but make me better (: have a great new year

[Jamie]

You are very welcome! I will :) Feel free to review my work :) have a great new year of 'simple beauty' :D

[Closet Writer]

I sure will and thank you!!

[Jamie]

You are most welcome :)

[Arsh]

A pleasure to read something new this day!

I enjoyed reading your poetry. Yes, even the beauty's itself found into 'simplicity'. What a great message you sent through your beautiful poetic words. I'd be looking forward to reading your work!

[Closet Writer]

thank you :)

[Gee]

You're welcome,be interested to hear what you make of my simple rhyming style if you get chance to have a peep.Take care

[wordman]

and all the pleasures of life are free