Betrayal

A Poem by Effie

Whispers of loss echo's

I love you more than at times I am able to bear for fear of losing you

The intensity of emotions overwhelm me and I run and hide

Seeming to withdraw I wrestle with fears I am trying to control

Whispers of loss echo’s within and no breath can I draw

I know you have betrayed me

Again

© 2018 Effie

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Iam-me

Anxiety and depression, sadness and upset. Are the human cure. But to understand these emotions and why we feel them. Gives you better understanding and acceptance in knowing they pass and you shall overcome.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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7 Years Ago

Thank you for the encouragement. I am in the process...

7 Years Ago

Keep your faith sweetheart. And know it will end soon. Others do relate and feel for you. As they th.. read more

C. Lee Battaglia

I struggle with Anxiety and depression. It sucks sometimes but the cure that I've found is to write! It's the most joyful thing that I do. Just write! It will take away those pains and hardships. I would also like to say that you have real potential in your writing and I am Genuinely surprised how amazing your writing style is! It was fantastic and I just wanted to let you know that you could even one day be a published author/writer if you wanted to! Keep smiling, keep writing, and most importantly. be you! You have a talent and this is a talent that all people should see and read!
I have a story here about my best friend called "The Blonde Girl", you don't have to read it if you don't want to, but I felt like I should share it with you. :)

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/

Posted 7 Years Ago

Pete

nothing worse. being betrayed knocks the wind out of us, sucks the breathe out. this is deeply expressed, real and strong. most of us have felt and you've captured it so well ...