The Only Exception...

This poem is for a contest. Hope you like it :)

What do you do when you love someone,

who's not right for you in every way?

What do you do when you can't ignore,

the bliss you feel when you see him any more?

If you knew that loving him,

would rip your family apart.

If you knew that being with him could only end in death?

I stare at the moon,

and stare at the stars,

like jewels in the dark night sky.

Then the answer to my questions are clear,

I love him too much,

he is too dear,

I don't care what I have to face.

He's my love.

My only exception.

Author's Note

Sorry if there are any grammar mistakes. This is for a contest like I said and I've based it on Viola from my book Knight decided what she should do when she realises she loves Christan.

Hope you liked it :)

Reviews

[livinglifeloud]

This is excellent. I can feel the emotions.

[Jessica Harmony]

I love this poem! Excellent writing, some of it gave me a Romeo-and-Juliet feel, the part about it ripping the family apart and it ending in death. Good Job! :)

[Sweets]

This is really good.
It's exactly how I feel :)
"If you knew that loving him,
would rip your family apart.
If you knew that being with him could only end in death?"
those are such great lines that grabbed my attention!
It's so true :)
I loved this!
Good job! :D
1000000/100 :)

[RIO]

Really good...
Well done=)

[My Fair Lady]

All logic goes out the window when love is involved.

[Arya_the_elven_lady]

Wow. Real Romeo and Juliet, am I right?

[Chipgirl]

wow really liked this. I argee with Ashley that you should become a your. sorry. and maybe "If you knew that being with him could end in death" Could become could ONLY end in death or something on those lines.

[Ashley]

It is cute but the line, "would rip you family apart." does not make sense, i think it should be YOUR family instead of YOU
:)

[Dark Empress]

This is really good. I like it :)