Broken Soldier

I'm the boy whose life was once taken,

Now that I'm back I'm a little more than just broken.

They say that they understand;

But now all of a sudden I'm no longer part of the clan.

I wish they could understand the pain;

But all my begging just goes to vain.

They say my life is mine to keep,

God, I wish I was buried six feet deep.

-LZ_D

Author's Note

One of the first poems I wrote please let me know what you think of it..

Reviews

[Abishai100]

Very emotional and straightly eerie or rather descriptive for a personality-oriented expression (no?). You might want to develop your word-interest for binding blankness with experience linked emotions, to exact memories or imaginations for human distances. Thanx for the share...it's a cool theme, LZ-D,

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