I'm Yours

Falling in Love

I've never met you, but feel like I know you

I have lots of love to share with you too.

We have much in common, that's a fact

I really hope we can stay on track.

I'm here for you, always and forever

I will leave you never.

I'm in for the long haul

I'll give you my all.

I'm yours.

Reviews

[Debra Wedin]

Wow. 6months later...and we are engaged!!!!
Amazing how God works.
I love you baby!

[Centfie]

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. That's a lovely style of writing... I would read it with descending note

[Lancerj]

Thank you Centfie! Appreciate the comments!

[Angi]

An internet meeting perhaps?

[Lancerj]

Dead on Angi! Pretty obvious huh?

[Angi]

The, 'I've never met you...' line gave it away! ;P

[Lancerj]

We met yesterday, in person.

[Debra Wedin]

Dive in he did ;-)
This is the best a most beautiful poem, that's
ever been written..as far as I'm concerned!
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart

[Lancerj]

Thank you! Every word is from the bottom of my heart!

[Debra Wedin]

Aww....thank you hun!!
It's one of those "butterfly" kind of things ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Simply stated, well-rhymed. Love from afar can be sweet for awhile, but sooner or later, you have to dive in or walk away. Good write!

[Lancerj]

Thank you Rita!

[quinfinn]

oh, careful young man....have you told her your feelings? to covet from afar can be a tender trap, been there , done that. i adored a woman for months once before i finally got up the courage to tell her , at which point she introduced me to her fiancee...ouch! love this write....never wait, leap now.

[Lancerj]

Thank you. She does know.

[Debra Wedin]

Thank you Quin..for your opinions and advice.
Love, relationships...all of it, especially if you start
out by the internet/phone..can be tricky!!!

But...sometimes you just got to give it a chance!
And.... Yes...I know :-)

[quinfinn]

internet is a whole other frontier. people are rarely what they say or show themselves to be....dangerous waters. trepidation!