the moons child

the moons child

A Poem by Lanky

Celestial beams of pale red light
casting off the lapping bay waters
brings true beauty to this dark night
in rolling waves hides the moons daughter
small though she may be
her true beauty i still see.

© 2010 Lanky


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i love the simplicity of this piece. its strong and very good imagery. it left an impression. this is a piece of art.

Posted 15 Years Ago
so few words that can leave such a lasting impression!! Amazing!

Posted 15 Years Ago
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Joe
This is a really good poem. Great imagery and rhythm really give it a nice flow. Great job! Keep it up!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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 Added on February 26, 2010
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Lanky
Lanky

Williamsburg, VA



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Im almost 19 years old and im incredibly unique. I just discovered my love for writing a few months ago, and since then i think my skills have flourished. I am completely and utterly in love and tha.. more..