Life changing

this is an experiment with style, and a thank you to a good friend

Four years ago

I did not know

who I truely was

I always felt lost, alone

And thats because

four years ago

I did not know

what a true friend was

 

then came along Jamie

to save me from my hell

to offer words of acceptance

and tell me i was special

 

Confidence and happiness grew

and blotted out the cold dark sorrow

whos hate and emptiness

had once filled me

and left me filling hollow

 

So jamie, here i thank you

for breaking that aweful spell

Reviews

[DarkLovingRaven]

That is so sweet. I like this a lot. I like, "So jamie, here i thank you, for breaking that aweful spell", the most. Keep on writing!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this

[misha]

Great job on the poem. I know how it feels to have a friend in your life that makes you feel like a different person. Good write