Too Big For Words

I try to tell you the way I feel
But the words refuse to speak
The letters are never good enough
The words come out too weak

 

I try to show you with my smile
The love I feel inside
But my actions always let me down
They always seem to hide

 

I wish that you could read my mind
To see what I'm thinking of
Then you'd know what I can give
A special kind of love

 

A love that's grown too big for words
A love I can't express
Then you'd know the way I feel
You wouldn't have to guess

 

I try to tell you the way I feel
But the words refuse to speak
The letters are never good enough
The words come out too weak

Reviews

Well Whisk, this came out so brilliantly. I guess, some can better write them down, like you did... Such a romantic piece! very well done!

E.L.

[Dean Kuch®]

Somethings are simply too good to put into words. This piece falls under that category for me.
Wonderfully stated...

[Brittany]

"The words refuse to speak" yet I envy the woman for whom this was written. It was simple and well said and very romantic. I liked the use of a chorus. Well done.

[Marie]

When letters aren's good enough and words are too week, it's time for a face-to-face confrontation...

[....]

This is so lovely, Nicely written

[Tonya]

I really like this! The honesty and openness is a pleasure to read in words combined so lovely. Nice poem!

[Renée]

So Sweet !....And my opinion...that's the best kind of love a woman can win ! ( ;