Broken Pieces

I know he breaks your heart each day

I see it when you cry

You see him look the other way

When a woman passes by

And I know you think he's cheating

But you still believe his lies

Another piece of your heart will break

I can see it in your eyes

And I just wanted to let you know

I'll take whatever he breaks

I'll mend all the broken pieces

And keep the promises he makes

I'll hold your smile next to mine

And make it stay that way

If you'll give me your broken pieces

I'll chase your tears away

Whenever he breaks what's left of you

And your love for me increases

I want you to know that I'll be here

With all your broken pieces

Reviews

[Renée]

Oh How Sweet ! What a lovely piece !

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Wow, this has left me without words. I am actually going through the same with my wife, healing the wounds from her past. Thank you for sharing.

This is really sweet.
Sweet and simple.
:)

Once again Whiskurz, well done. :) From reading your works, I find that you tend to set your themes to a simple, rhythm, like one you might find in a song, or like the one where you echoed the nursery rhyme. I like it :) I think it's fascinating, and it's one of those aspects that makes your writings intriguing. Keep it up!!! :D

[Emerald Seas]

This is such an endearing read. I love the sentiment expressed, and you have expressed it very well.