The Bluebird And The Fly

Nature makes its own decisions

It decides who lives or dies

Like the hunger of a common bluebird

Who's driven by her baby's cries

Now even the housefly will do the same

Driven by its hunger, they seek

Trying its best to avoid its doom

By way of the bluebird's beak

Somewhere soon their paths will cross

And the strong will devour the weak

Nature's design, cannot be broken

And the housefly's future looks bleak

Then out of the sky, lightning strikes

As the bluebird falls to the ground

A naked power line decides her fate

And the housefly's feast, is found

It's funny to see how nature works

Pondering while wondering why

Things are nothing like they appear

Like the bluebird and the fly

Reviews

[Underestimated]

Deep and true, the satirical approach is very amusing! This kept my eye on the words, I wasn't ever bored, good job my friend!

[Dean Kuch®]

This was GREAT! Sarcastic and witty, I loved how the tables got turned on that poor, unsuspecting bluebird. Funny...

[selkietales]

This is great! Is it bad I found this really funny?

i really enjoyed this write, simply wonderful

[Cherrie]

very good- great twist on the truth's of nature