The Perfect Girl

I love the way she looks at me

When we go out for a walk

I love how she just listens

And always lets me talk

I love the way she lets me choose

What we're watching on TV

And when I leave to go to work

I know she's missing me

I never see her mother

The way it's supposed to be

She never wants my credit cards

And that's just fine with me

She never tells me what to do

Like taking out the trash

Or if she see a sale somewhere

She never asks for cash

We never watch a chick flick

She lets me be a man

So I run my fingers through her hair

Just as often as  I can

I know we'll be together 

Until the very end

I know that she'll be faithful

And always be my friend

A love like this is very rare

And often hard to find

Can you tell I really love my dog

She's simply one of a kind

Reviews

[Chris]

A well led tale... was a good read.

[natzky]

heheh..this poem of yours is really cute...hahah
it makes me laugh when I reached the final lines...LOL's

[Missy Lorraine]

Wow, this is great. I knew this chick was too good to be true. You completely lead your readers in one direction, then take a sharp turn that's shocking! Change nothing, bu the way, I actually laughed when i finished reading this. Thank you for the read request.

[Bryan Micheni]

:) nice

[Sandy Beach]

Ha Ha. I knew this had to be too good to be true. Nice job Mr. Whiskurz

[Harley (arbiter)]

I burst out laughing at the end. That was hilariously awesom. Nice write

[Perfect Mistake]

hahaha omg this is perfect!! Loved it great job :3 bravo

[PokemonFan#1]

I was imagining a woman, but in the end it turned out to be a cute doggy. I love my dog too.

A very beautiful poem!

Keep it up!
=^_^=

[Freckled Princess]

I love my dog, too.

[Renée]

Dog..not only mans bf...but a womans bestie .... Cute poem