Natural Selection

this is a comedic poem. made for entertainment (well duh)

Natural selection

I'm the best

Natural selection

I passed the genepool tests

Natural selection

Darn my height

Natural selection

I can't fight

Natural selection

I'm allergic to air

Natural selection

life ain't fair

Natural selection

I'm starving

Natural selection

wait- how did I survive to adulthood?

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Good use of repetition.
genes are not picked, but received.
It is natural to question the why of it.

[barleygirl]

Nice entertaining little ditty. The points you bring up are quite unusual & unexpected, requiring the reader to think a bit to relate it to the title & repeated refrain. I'm not sure what "allergic to air" means. I like your playful sense of inhibition. Well, now that I've read all your stuff posted here, looking forward to seeing what's next!?!??!

[Sami Khalil]

Funny and witty. Bravo...............................

[Aventicus]

Don't worry , there are still more demons yet to come. Such is the process of natural selection.