I Feel You

 

In the clouds
I see your face
In the evening breeze
I feel your soul
In the stars
I see the magic you create
Through the soft caress of the wind
I feel your kisses
In your embrace
I feel the tide
In the night
I feel your body touching mine
When I think of all this
I realize that I feel your love
In all that I see and do
Each is part of you and me.
I Feel You
In the clouds
I see your face
In the evening breeze
I feel your soul
In the stars
I see the magic you create
Through the soft caress of the wind
I feel your kisses
In your embrace
I feel the tide
In the night
I feel your body touching mine
When I think of all this
I realize that I feel your love
In all that I see and do
Each is part of you and me.

 

copyright Lasla Moore 2009

Reviews

[Wallflower]

This is a beautiful poem. i love the short and quick lines, they do the poem a great justice.

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Thank You very much :) wallflower!

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Lasla this piece has a beautiful flow to it from beginning to end. this is a piece expertly written. The images are there but they seem to gently elude the grasp of the reader. The is a very subtle difference here between going for what one wants and allowing it to come to the one in need. There is a type of floating imagery here Lasla. There seems to be a hidden element of doubt that is so well hidden here it goes unnoticed. Well crafted, the technique here is very interesting! I admire it.

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Thank You Vincent!

[IPMONER]

i just love the over-all depiction. that pictures are so vivid and reluctant.. its so resplendent. the poem was so light and so vibrant

reading and comprehending it is very easy since it doesn't force you to push through to those you cant understand

LOVE IT

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Thank You !

[Erotic Goddess]

In all that I see and do
Each is part of you and me.

Lovely imagery in this piece and it had such a wonderful and sensual flow to it. Thank you for sharing this with me.

xxoxx

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Sharing with you was a pleasure and thank you!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

beautiful poem. kinda reminds me of my short story "fallen" i wrote here on this site about a year ago, you should check it out. a lot of imagrey, and i like the idea you present of love feeling like a gentle breeze running through you. that's a nice idea, and you played it off well here in all your stanzas. i l iked it.

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Thank You sue you know your comments always make me smile thank you. Have a wonderful day my sweet friend!

[Ladysue]

So beautiful expressed and a wonderful feeling to have. I enjoyed this a lot. Wonderful!