The girl with the Raven's Wing

A dark themed poem of light and Darkness

It was a festival of light
tendrils of shadow slithered along the ground
I was running until black blurred my vision
I glanced up to see a girl

Her hair like a ravens wing
feathers fluttering with each breath she took
tints of color I could see 
but soon the caw of the raven signaled me

The last gleam of twilight leaving
as I see the fleeting beauty leave
the moon coming out
as the black silhouette of her wing flees

the darkness surrounds me
as each time I look
all I can see 
is the girl with the raven's wing

Author's Note

Sorry if it's not good

Reviews

[Dak]

i think the imagery was well done. also i have an interest with this kind of theme. sometimes its hard to think of anything else once youve witnessed something so memorable. good work(: