Heat

burning fire blazes

copper coals scattered about

ash fills the indigo sky

Reviews

[Chris]

I thought Haiku - 'til the 3rd line count was too high...

The visual tones and rhythm worked.

[Wórdsmíth]

The real love foundations of love has too walked away of hearts into such "blazes" of grey. Excellent work!

[Ruth]

Stunning visuals and concise impact, beautiful :) x

[A. Amos]

Marvelous and spectacular, I felt your words!

[Laur]

thank you!

[Mayank]

It triggers the imagination and make you think more about it... the sky, sunlight, and paints vivid images.

[Laur]

thanks! :)

[Avinash]

Fires all sorts of imagination and that is the success of any short piece. It is open ended. Like another door opened inside your mind. Thanks for inviting.

[Laur]

thank you very much Avinash :)

[Luna Zerimar]

"Ash fills the indigo sky."

I love, love, love, LOVE.

There are vivid images in my head, and it's beautiful.

...So beautiful.

[Laur]

thank you! That was my favorite part

[Luna Zerimar]

You're welcome.

[MomzillaNC]

This feels like the beginning of a great poem.

[Laur]

thanks! :)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.