He Said

He said he loves me

But we need some time apart

I said I'd be here

Waiting for him to come back

Till I saw him with that blonde.

Author's Note

This poem is a Tanka

Reviews

[Madhusudha]

That's a succint poem in which very few words convey the whole story of where its going to end. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

[Laura3841]

Thank you so much Madhu :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. A beginning and a dead-end. The blonde make the story have the final chapter. Good use of words and thoughts. A complete poem is so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Laura3841]

Thank you so much Coyote!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nicely done… we need to know when to let go, and that is certainly a clear sign.

[Laura3841]

Absolutely Rock And Roll Cowboy :) Thanks for reading and reviewing my little poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Twas my pleasure.