I Was Right

A poem about being right at the end of it all.

So I was right.

You were caught in the moment

You swore that you loved me

I swore that you were lying 

But I still believed you

And now I hate you

Now I wish it all to end

It's over

While you were sleeping

I stole the sun

I blacked the sky out

I tore the earth open

And in that chasm I dropped my heart

I roam now to remind you

Of what you created 

This nothingness

This pain

That screaming voice in your head

Yelling at you

That you still love me

Still holding to the truth

We once shared

The truth that eats away

At your mind

Tearing your soul apart 

Let it remind you

I was right....

Reviews

[Victorious]

Dear LawrenceA,

I like how this has more than one meaning. It can either be about cheating or it could be about finding out that a person you are dating doesn't really love you, but were in fact faking. I found it deep and the metaphor of how much the pain was, was exquisite, very raw and emotional.

Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely Victorious

God bless

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime being right can brake your heart. The poem had a real life feel to the words. Strong story in the poem led to a strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote