My Enemy

My Enemy

A Story by LawrenceRaybon
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A ten word story

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I raise my sword to strike down my enemy, myself.

© 2015 LawrenceRaybon


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LawrenceRaybon
One of three ten word stories I wrote to try to get back into writing.

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This one is brilliant. We need to fight our own war.

Posted 10 Years Ago
Welcome back :)
I misread this as "I raise my sword to strike down my fallen self."
My misreading turned it into a pun :)


Posted 10 Years Ago

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 Added on May 30, 2015
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LawrenceRaybon
LawrenceRaybon

Jackson, MS



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Hi! I'm an avid reader who loves to write. I also love helping others who are serious about improving their writing! My critiques are in-depth and honest, no ego stroking and I expect the same wh.. more..