Reaching The Surface

Reaching The Surface

A by Vertigo

Time stood on its hind legs and tore through the pages of my life in its varying shades of gray...my eyes held yours for just a moment and everything would reach the surface and I could see nothing but a blur...encased within the traces left behind.

© 2009 Vertigo


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First I want to say: I don't like poetry. However, this was lovely. You painted a picture and created emotions with just a few words.
Outstanding
Nonnye


Posted 11 Years Ago

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Vertigo
Vertigo

Lithia Springs, GA



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My work...does have personal meaning, however in poetry it's about how it makes you feel or how it speaks to you... -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------.. more..