Hybrid

I am a hybrid born of lightness against a shaded window pane, a reflection of shadows. I lay hidden behind hazel eyes that have held yours for just a moment in passing always lasting and contrasting irises embellished by the sunlit sky line meeting the ocean. If only our hands would meet at these times with yours and mine in their scars hidden always...within one another and within each other.

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

A well written piece of prose Well thought out content but could be improved by rewriting in poetic form with attention meter and preferably a regular rhyme pattern

[Michael X]

wow, you have an amazing way with love poetry that is so unique, fresh and original, i love the concepts
you employ with an edge on imagery and beautiful detail, truly brilliant and well written leah.