Breathing Light

Living is like breathing in the light
Even when the night enfolds you
Like you ever knew
Sooner or later
You've got to rise up
When the clouds fall around you
And the lightness filters through
And even then
You just want to feel alive...

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, i love the concept you've created, and the way your words flow, and the style, form, consistant in ways your words are artfully rendered, telling of desire, the title "breathing light" draws the mind to a plane of thought where all things are possible, this is a yearning blended with the meany colors of dreaming
that paint themselves across the canvas of the readers heart. beautiful :)