Falling

Falling is constant
With the supernovas pressed
Into my irises
And my insides falter with the vertigo
Pulling me into you
Until I open my eyes
And realize
That the space around me is empty
And all I see
Is what is left of me.

 

Reviews

[Avoiry]

I'm not quiet sure what this is about but im going to take a stab and say it is falling in and out of a relationship only to be left with the remains. Then again things like that can be compared greatly to the feeling of vertigo . I have never seen in that way before so im going to have to thank you for showing me something new. I like the tone of the piece and the length keeps it just where you want it to be for impact. Nice work.