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 Lightning crashes 

Along a broken sky 

And the torrents soak through my skin

With my arms barely out-spread

I walk carefully

As though I am on a balancing beam

And the earth moves under my feet

 

I am blinded and unseen

Like a dream

Awakened

Lost in the amber sun

With its broken light

That shines

Only when day is night.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

lightening is a specific element that brings your words to life, as if the intent paints a defintion of power and yearning and a longing to escape, a dream to awaken the senses to all that surrounds the environment, i am sure many people can relate to the meaning in one way or another. i find this brillaint incripted, yet easy inough in subtlely to allow the reader to draw their own conclusion. wow, loved it.

[Hide From God]

Very good piece, your flow is impeccable! Another very good piece you have written! The description makes me feel like I can really see the lighting in the sky, a very good piece indeed! Good job!