Breathing ever so slightly

 Shouting in whispers
Mindful
Even as our breaths mingle
In our own silent touch
Gentle
Within a shared calling
Just so that I could 
Breathe into you
With marked hands
Lost in the awareness
Slightly upheld
Between you and I.

Reviews

[ebur™]

great poem, greatly expressed, and great job. :)

[Safrina]

this is so beautiful and so gentle, like when someones hand swipes you on the shoulder and you get little butterfly wings fluttering all down your spine

yes, something like that x

[deeps]

Wonderful expressed write here.