Like a phoenix

 The countless wings

Of a sudden day dream

With-held in sun beams 

That fall through tree tops

And I am aware

Unwavering 

Watching every movement

Of sound

I could fly 

With these broken wings

Singed on the edges

Dare I rise 

Above in lightness

In soundless fire

And everlasting ash

Like a phoenix

Reviews

[Galldora King]

Wow. Nicely writen maybe edit it a little and you could add some other things. Its short and simple. It kinda reminds me of how people would be better off if they had the characteristics of a Phoenix. It would be nice if all of us could have the courage to get back up from the ashes :D.