Pulse

 The pulsing

The night

Lost in the white light

Narrow

And hard like the wind

Sending sighs

Of our own

Since we are more than alone

 

I could share your breath

In hidden sighs

Casting shallow fog

In the frigid air 

With only our company

To keep us warm

Reviews

[ZeeArsonist]

Good flow, the second half more authentic than the first. I enjoy the "sharing breaths and casting shallow fog" bit. You've captured the intensity of each fleeting moment that new love brings. lovely, indeed.

[deeps]

I like this write I thought it was wonderful, well expressed!

[Poeticpiers]

I dont normally care for free form writing but this one created a lasting impression