Silent Awakening

Varied light in shallow breaks

Within cracked stained windows

Dreamless figures

And solemn sunsets

Faltering in every step

Tattered as a castle

Breathing stale air

Fallen love

Silent dreams

Pressing within every soundless awakening

Reviews

[changeofseason]

This is beautiful and very well written...I felt as if I could see the exact images you described in the poem. Haunting.

[Michael X]

dawns ealy light piercing the iris, beautiful artwork, the imagery has an ambience which gives the picture a ceertain waking feeling liken to a dream.
I really enjoyed reading.

[deeps]

I felt this as a sad write. Strong emotion. It is very well written and expressed!