Sometimes we never know what happened. Those are often the hardest ones to move on from. But my favorite part of this poem is the ending. Absolutely never give them the satisfaction of knowing....oh do I ever agree.
Some day,
I will see you...
probably a nostalgic feeling
will invade me,
but I won't give you
the satisfaction
to see it.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
hahahahah you're something else, thank you so much!!
Sometimes we never know what happened. Those are often the hardest ones to move on from. But my favorite part of this poem is the ending. Absolutely never give them the satisfaction of knowing....oh do I ever agree.
Some day,
I will see you...
probably a nostalgic feeling
will invade me,
but I won't give you
the satisfaction
to see it.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
hahahahah you're something else, thank you so much!!
The one that got away. It's unfortunate yet it happens more than often to most people. I guess you just have to catch the signs of it before it happens unexpectedly. Great work. A fine write and read. :)
I am just a random guy that landed here. I've been writing for some time. Now, I am just trying to better my writing: lyrics, free verse. Thanks for reading. more..