Bleeding Eyes

Rain, Rain
Go Away
You were never meant to live today.
You only bring
This pain and ache-
Battle cries and a burning quake

Rain, Rain
Go Away
My eyes they burn with acidic tears.
You've singed my soul
And pierced my heart-
Breaking me in half with a simple start.

Rain, Rain
Go away
And don't ever come back
Even on my saddest day.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked how you use the words and thoughts.
"Rain, Rain
Go Away
My eyes they burn with acidic tears.
You've singed my soul
And pierced my heart-
Breaking me in half with a simple start. "
The above lines were solid. Left the reader with place and vision. Thank you LeeAnne for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Peyton Light]

Nice :) Might want a spell check for the last line. Really good though :) Brings a lot of visual thinking.