Can't Sleep

A short poem

I used to sleep to get away,
But now you've followed me
To my hiding place.
I feel you in my dreams,
Each kiss a broken string
Of my already torn heart.
How could you-
After all we've been through...


I wish I'd never loved you.

Reviews

[Paul]

Very powerful especially the last three lines of the poem. I can't say I haven't felt the same way in the past. Nicely written poem.

[Silver]

Beautiful , sad , powerful

Don't give up to find love , even when your heart still bleed

[APOORVA]

I DON'T HAVE WORDS REALLY TO APPRECIATE THIS POEM.
I CAN RELATE TO IT LIKE IT HAPPENS WITH ME.
WHEN SOMEONE FOLLOWS YOU TO YOUR DREAMS.
WISH I'D NEVER LOVED YOU...
WISH I'D NEVER LOVED YOU...

[JoeM]

I loved the wonderful insight and your way of conveying it. Congratulations.