SOUNDS OF SILENCE/DWO

inspired by Skylah Ginette poem: Sounds....

 

SOUNDS OF SILENCE/DWO 

 

 

Sounds of silence are like death warmed over,

 

I welcome all sound ... good or bad...

 

Sounds of silence are like a canvas on wheels

 

my tongue painting vo-cables of huge proportions

 

Sounds of silence are like wind in my hair

My body flows a river bed, reaching the safety of a mother's sweet hand

 

Sounds of silence permeate all through my core,

 

I'm forever hearing the universe's voice, once again

 

Sounds of Silence, lay 'em on me..

 

 

©2009 112209 1115A...1141A

Author's Note

S&G said it all....

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

I really like this poem, great title, different style, but impressed. Feels clean and spiritual. Very great work!!

-Will

[JB Murray]

Hehe...enjoyed this one... reminds me of a very pertinent moment from the movie Eddie & The Cruisers II that I often quote to my band, where he explains the kind of sound and meaning he's going after in his music... looking forward to more! thanks!

[Skylah Ginette]

hey haha i inspired this poem! good job, i like sound of silence like death warmed over. i wish i had thought of it for my poem :( i think the ending could be more powerful, but other than that great!

[Christopher.Holmberg]

Oh my ,a very gorgeous composition...
I was captured and distilled in silence.

This to me was a very spiritual poem , it touched my heart knowing it came from yours.
simply brilliant.
A++

[cest la vie]

Bee-U-Tee-Full!!!