~Tranquil Collision~

Passion and chemistry between two lovers, when NOTHING can stop it...

Impressive in the fierceness of his honorable devotion,
My soul belonging to this gentle beast, his loyalty providing my feast.
Stimulating all of my senses, indulging in every emotion,

Incredible power enticing me in close for he is compelling,
My body lusting for his vital chemical, this creation before me promising sensual.
Dominating my passion, temptation for desire sweetly expelling,

Such stance of this male is hungry in royal defense,
Near collision for what he wants, though he is not alone as I submit my permission.
Seductive is his touch with pace his control, he remains sensitive,

Caressing my satin kissed skin, his scent does erotically allure,
Higher then any drug, I am elated, king and queen pridefully mated.
Loyalty remains, sweet passion exchanged delivering pain's cure,

Faithful unity between lovers as two become one,
Entrancing deep tranquil demise, sedation controlled through the eyes.
Romance nor bond of this capability, united in completion now eternally undone.

Reviews

[Leelanne]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem . I like the ending the most.

[MachinaWriter]

Some great, evocative language in this piece. Impressively put together. The passion between two people is like a catalyst, but the chemistry has to be correct. Otherwise what comes out can be toxic. If the chemistry is right, though, what comes out is the Elixir of Life. Thanks for sharing this, it was a pleasure to read ^^

[Leelanne]

Thank you very much for your review, it was very inspirational. This is my favorite poem so far. Emotion seems to create the best creative writing and I appreciate that there is a gift in that. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but also acknowledge my words :)

[MachinaWriter]

Of course, I know this feeling very well. I've recently had an amazing muse who has inspired the same kind of emotion in my work. I've seen my writing improve, and even change in style, since she came into my life and in my mind. So I understand exactly where you're coming from. Thank you for sharing this, it was my pleasure through and through ^^