Rose

just feelings for someone in deadly way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When morning came and sun shone through

the veil of fog that rose from earth,

the roses dressed in pearls of dew

seemed ready for a fresh new birth.

Little angel played her music

and Rose listened so intently,

the melodies floating on thick

mist and sounding so heavenly

Reviews

[Ellen Kolman]

I love this...beautiful...the roses do listen and the music stirs the soul.................nice to see you again Lee.

[Lee]

thanks so much beautiful..............

[Ellen Kolman]

My pleasure! hugs

[Paul Bell]

Don't know, seems to me like the new morning brings fresh hope. Like it.

[andrew mitchell]

this write has many facets to dwell on, whether the fog was a protector now vulnerable on its uplifting but ready to take on the world in its show. a nice poem.

[Lee]

thanks dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the allegory here...and is opened to several interpretations...positive and negative...
the veil of fog...the rose that can be so innocent and young...led to death by the secret frost...

or the rose being reborn into love...

just enough to help us find our own way through this poem...

[Lee]

spot on here.......................