Dream patchwork

Seams of dreams, tatter and fray
One room leads to another, time in replay
Awareness creeps through, grasping the direction
Lucidity blinds the veil, push out of this dimension

Reviews

[StateofHope]

The first two lines grabbed ahold of me, I felt I could follow, or better to say, led by you. I apologize I couldn’t stay on the path you were leading me down with the last two lines. However, your poem was very strong and spoke well for being 4 lines in length.

[Laymeto.rest]

The last two lines are when you begin to lucid dream and you gain control instead of going in circles. Thank you very much for your feedback.

[Relic]

I would love to have a lucid dream. Especially when with a pretty girl. lol :)

Nice one.